All Comments on 'Prime Time 01'

"Fear seized me as if a large icy hand grabbed hold!"

God, you're a terrible writer.

Between a tenuous grasp of basic spelling, punctuation and syntax, you write these cheesy sentences.

Please, no more!

I disagree with the last commenter. Although it suffers from mechanical errors, this story is well-written because it's emotionally gratifying on top of being sexy. Good work!

If you are reading a story and are turned off by the mechanics of the story; fine. I guess. I see lots of whining about getting perfect spelling, grammer and all that ...

Many here are not professional writers. I suggest that you either cut them some slack, or if you cannot deal with this without taking offense, I suggest you go else for your reading material

......It is ok to comment on language syntax spelling...But also address the theme of the story..

....................... By the way where are your stories?

A heart-warming story. Very authentic with two caring and very likeable characters - I hope they discover many more ways to have naughty fun with each other...

I am a 77 tear old with all the symptoms of our hero in this article.

Wish I could meet a lady like her.

Good accurate job.