by photoscribe
Thank you. You have a beautiful body and your contribution is much appreciated.
Very good and real photos. Much better than most illustrated stories! Beauty of body, mind, and spirit is shown very well. All you need now is to find a Dominant to serve. Good luck in the future. We will want to see more from and of you.
(Do not pay attention to that first crude comment. He/she/it has no idea of true beauty.)
Congratulations,
It's nice to see a woman with a fuller type of figure, who is not ashamed to show her body off reasonably tastefully.
The world does NOT need stick figure thin models, what it DOES need is models who have figures more in line with most women.
However, it might not be a bad idea to get (or hire) some more tasteful lingerie. Yours looks like it comes off Ebay (sorry to be mean)
Not too bad a story either, but it was defintiely the photos of YOU that sold the story.
If you have the patience, perhaps another story (perhaps with swimwear) would please the multitudes.
Just because a person isn't a stick thin model does not mean woman is not gorgeous to look at. So yes ignore the negative comments abotu how a person looks it has nothing to do with the story and has no place on a site like this.
I don't know who 'Maddie' is or if she is 'real' or not I only know that she is very, very sexy and given a choice between her and a skinny stick thin size ZERO woman? I would go for her any time. And as a personal choice I like women to have curves. My wife is not a big woman but she has curves in all the right places. And many people think she is very sexy. 'Maddie' is as well.
If the writer truly 'knows' this person then please pass on my compliments, both for the underwear and to the model herself.
The story was fun too:)
Regards
AW
Yes well done nice pics, great story and even better photos to with the top model. Can I be your next photographer Please
I just love the pics,I would love to have lingerie party and love to be the one to take the photos of the party too
Being a photographer I loved the pictures, very tasteful but still very sexy. I agree with the others, we don't need more stick thin models and I actually prefer the voluptious woman. nice story made great with the photos.. hope to see more stories/photos with you in them.
Excellent photographs and what a superb girl! Lovely, voluptuous body, maybe could have been even better if she had huge tits, but you can't have everything!
What made this story for me was the fact that the model was someone who looked real. She was not a fantasy girl . . . she was a beautiful young woman with curves and major sex appeal. Loved the story, loved her.
The premise of the story was good - a bit thin on writig, but WOW! Superb model, excellent photographs, and love the lingerie shots!
The story was great - very erotic with terrific pictures. I don't need any lingerie, but I'll pay any fair (or unfair) price for the girl.
The model needs no apology whatsoever. She's exactly what I look for in girls I date, and my wife of 12 years had a very similar figure, and guys were always hitting on her when we went out. Fortunately, she seemed to barely notice them, and the attention she gave me was so wonderful for my ego. I still miss her immensely, 18 years after a drunk teenager took her life by crashing a red light.
I respect people with different opinions about what they find attractive in the opposite sex. However, I have no respect for people who maliciously strike out at strangers with hurtful and deeply unkind comments, simply because the internet gives them anonymity. The writers who refer to a beautiful girl, who just isn't their "type," as a "horse," a "chubster," or worse, a "slut," demonstrate that their personalities are severely flawed. I'd rather be dating or married to a 400 pound ugly duckling with kind, loving, and generous qualities, than be involved with individuals who possess such glaring character deficiencies as these critics, that reveal the obvious inadequacies of their upbringing. It is these people who need apologies, but they don't know enough to ask for them.
Lastly, whatever "Maddie's" real name is, I'd love to date her, and I'd be proud to take her anywhere to show her off as my "trophy" girl. Her body is toned, she doesn't have a spot of cellulite, there's not a single ripple, her skin is tight, clear, and beautiful, and her face is lovely, especially when she's smiling. Unfortunately, I'd be rather embarrassed, as Maddie would be showing me off as her elderly father or young grandfather. I don't think I have enough self esteem to pass that off. On the other hand, to pose nude on the internet and subject yourself to all kinds of possible criticism, takes far more confidence than I come close to having. To summarize, this girl is a "hottie" - absolutely fantastic. Please use her again in more stories, and I think most of us would love to hear a little bit about her, if that would be possible.
Thanks.
This is a very different type of story for me........but it is extremely erotic!!!
This is the absolute best ever illustated story. You are gorgeous, sexy AND demure at the same time. What a pleasure to view you!!
Great story - nice photos - don't make us wait another year for your NEXT submittal ...
I'll let you have a party here! I liked the story! Thanks!
but that's your fault as you left me breathless.
You're gorgeous!
Lovely, sultry model! Simply beautiful in all her glorious curves, flat yet soft looking belly, full but firm looking breasts. Pretty face; loved all her expressions too. Thought the ruffle skirt was super cute, she looked really adorable in it!
Now that is what a youthful womanly body is supposed to look like! Not an 8 year old --all gangley with sharp angles... unless you're a sick perv who needs to be beaten massively about the head and neck. Perhaps that's why that stick figure is so popular... too many sick pervs breeding and passing down their weakness.
Oh...great story too!
Great story and I must know who is the model cause she is just perfect!
I've printed out the story-pictures and all..she's splattered in cum....the story..photos....she's made to.....many times over!!!!
Lovely woman and a nicely written story! Reminds me my first lover, Betty. Thanks so much!
What a teasing, provacative and tantallizing story. Your photos were icing on the cake.
Sa' weet body and beautiful facial features.
Can't wait to read more.
Take care,
Rick
fwb.20153@yahoo.com
Lingerie parties are sexier than described, given freedom to attract male attention in minimal genital apparel every show, submitting to scrutiny of unclad breasts with fully erect nipples. Sadly by refusing to show models' genital charms albeit briefly, readers could guess the writer's sexuality, unless displaying a cleanly shaven vulva moistened in sexual excitement?
Please take a hint from 'lady reader' comments, revealing true 'biographic' photos in your next submission!
Very well said. Some people have no shame. Well written illustrated story, and sexy model. Thank you. ML
rarely does someone put so much effort into preparation. It was a joy to read and I look forward to more xx
Sexy. Well done. Did I mention sexy? BTW, if you (readers) have adblock, then you won't see the pics.
she is gorgeous. please let us know how to find more pics of her!!!! story wasn't bad either
What a body! I love girls who are built like that.., and her tits....... Mmmmmmmmm. If I knew how to get more pictures of her (especially totally naked), I'd fill my hard drive full.
Did I mention "What a body!?" It's love at first sight.., and I ain't blind!
Natural beauty is what men should be looking, she is super. Like her smile and her posting and above all the photographer is great. Loves the story, simple and realistic.
Appreciate more......
I don't post often, but felt a need to do so, as some of the comments here ... well, annoyed me frankly.
You can be fairly objective about 'pretty' - we're fed a diet of idealism from the mainstream media, that tells us what it is.
However 'sexy' and 'beautiful' have nothing to do with geometry. The photos manage both very nicely indeed. (And I'd argue a strong case for 'pretty' as well)
The story was a fun way to knit the pictures together and did enhance the progression of the visual narrative, but damn, she is gorgeous!
Overall this was fantastic, story and shots. The model is stunning. Would love to meet her, or write. contact = tolikyou at breakthru dot com
I absolutely love the. Premis of these stories and the execution is fantastic. I wish there were more stories like them.
That has to be the best story that I have ever read. The pics are perfect along with the story. I was mesmerized and fell in love with the model. She could be my twin sister. Thanks, Lee Ann
As i said before i very much welcome this line of stories that too with there kind of photos. Keep it up.
It was fairly well written rather than extremely well written but with those pictures 5 out of 5 was the only score I could consider. You have a beautiful voluptuous body, a body that is near enough to perfect and I get the impression you would look very pretty with or without make up too. You and whoever took the pics displayed your outer beauty to perfection. You certainly have shown what the illustrated category is all about. It wouldn't have been nearly as hot if you weren't fully clothed in the first pic. It actually made the story more exciting that it didn't go beyond taking pictures, that anything else was left to the imagination for a change.
Read one of your other stories, for first time, just a little while ago and now have read all but two of them and so far they are (hmmmmmmm is there a word above excellent, thinking there isn't soooo) EXCELLENT. Not sure if this model is the writer, nor do i care, she is HOT and am I the only one that thinks she looks like the chick from Myth Busters (maybe not same person but could DEFENITLY be a sister at the least). Loved the fact that the model didn't look like she was out of playboy, huslter, and or any other blabitty blab magazine or even a porn star chickie. To me best part was A) She most defenitly was pick anyone or all: Beautifull, Stunning, HOT, Sexy, Breath taking (personal fave saying for beauty), and could go on and on; B) She looked like someone i could run into in real life, like in the mall or on the sidewalk; and since there are usually three reason tossin this in the mix; C) Faked emotion or not in the early pictures she DID look nervous and insecure like she had not thought of herself as looking sexy or beautiful when being captured on film (Dont get me wrong i like porn (uh duh im in an illustrated erotic stories section) but most of the porn "stars" even the supposed porn virgins, first timers, or whatever name on movie box ______ here. They all look very jaded and i dont know have 'dead' eyes maybe one too many humiliations to get to the point of being paid for sex on film or in pictures) This young woman though is very beautifull and able to convey her emotions very well and able to this while looking VERY SEXY (in case she is insecure or self concious of her form/figure ALL ABOVE STATEMENTS ARE TRUE AS I SEE THEM, LMAO YES EVEN THE MYTH BUSTER CHICK ONE, so author please send along at least one readers heart or lower down felt opinion and reinforce her confidence it never hurts and let her know "DAMN GIRL YOU SEXY"). To close this rambling hopefully slightly sensical comment (damn bacardi).Thank you for the story and pics and please continue writing and illustrating.
VERY HOT .... PHOTOGRAPHS EXCELLENT AND EXCITING.....WANT MORE COMPLETE NAKED PHOTO..
Redheaded, full-figured, truly feminine, naturally curvaceous...the list in my mind goes on and on! Can you PLEASE post more pictures of her...she TRULY puts the TEASE back into STRIPTEASE! Bill
The photos were great! As a female how enjoys getting photographed I found this very sexy while still leaving something to be imaged.
What a wonderful story AND a truly sexy woman! Nothing too blatant but plenty to show off her sexiness! THIS is how a woman is supposed to be built!!! Excellent all around.
you wont break that bouncing on it. very nice and the story was great too.
To go with great Pics. Definitely need to use this model again.
Best-best. U should make a Vid. Even without going any further. The knickers off shot could have been better with just alittle imag but the rest .... blood pressure 'uping'
Simply wonderful; your facial expression and all over natural beauty makes you 101% desirable. Thank you so much for sharing. We truly enjoyed your story and pics. Bob & Patricia
Stripping off as the story goes along. MARVELOUS
Lovely tits and nipples , and legs to die for.
Makes life for Dirty Old Men worth living for
Best Wishes to our beautiful Model
XXX
The story was simple and straightforward, the images added a lot.
The model is absolutely gorgeous, body facial expressions, everything. the last lingerie set was incredible.
Keep up the good work would love to see more!
...commenter has admitted they'd love to have her "sit on my face" -- so would I, as well as see her 69 with another woman, if it can't be me. I'm also a full-figured female who looks very similar to this model, and I can't stop wondering if we smell and taste the same, too.
Good story line which flowed seamlessly into the center of the story: your model. You score a B- for story/plot "believability". I've yet to see an "A".
PERFECT "average" body type and my personal favorite. "Girl next door" type who develops from caterpillar to butterfly...
A+ for your taste in subject matter and illustrations. I hope to see more of your work here. And soon. :-)
I liked the story and love the model. If you still have contact with her, tell her she is as beautifulas she is courageous. I would come to any party she's hosting no matter what she's selling.
I always thought about being a photographer, This really makes me want to go for my dream. Awesome model for a beautiful story. More please..
If i were 25 years younger and unattached i would ask her out!
I think your model is so sexy. Any other photo's of her? Please coax her into another shot.
PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE...let us know her name and /or where we can find more photographs of her....this young lady is BEAUTIFUL!!!!
It's a shame Maddie didn't smile much except when wearing the man's shirts. My fist photo/story. I think I like the idea. 'A' for effort; four stars.
The shoulders define her as they add to her wholesomeness and sexuality as opposed to the Hollywood code of staying thin. If she was in Hollywood, she would hate being told to drop poundage in shoulders and hips and given a fixated number of pounds to lose. Or being humiliated for chowing down on food. Healthy living beats starvation diets to please Hollywood and dominant skinny women.
The ones in the blue shirt are my favorites. So beautiful, so sexy, but yet they have an innocence about them. Beautiful, beautiful lady!
pretty, has the sexist bawd, I WANNA be trapped between those sweet thighs with my tongue in her anus all day Lay my head on her office chair so I don'y miss a second of tongue in anus time.
She's so purrfuct that I didn't read the story.
Is she a pro or amatuer? If the latter, where did you find her, or are you lucki enuff to service her regularly?\
T00 BAD we didn't get see her honey pot
The transition from shyness to totally enjoyment of the moment and being comfortable with one's skin! Is always a joy to see that change occur - very well done
I took pictures years ago as I worked with a photographer in his studio. He also had a contract with a TV station to film the news. I worked the lights most of the time, but this one shoot he had to leave to do a news story, a house was burning. I took over and finished the roll of film. Anita was a stripper at a club and wanted some photos to sell to her admirers. That last nude photo was hot, nice tummy and breasts. It would have been better if you sat on the stool, legs open and an arm behind your head to better give your breast a slight lift.