All Comments on 'A Tale of Forbidden Love Pt. 02'
by mejau71
- 28 Comments
WilliamTellsOvertureover 13 years agoI really enjoyed this chapter and even listened to Chapte 1 again as well to refamiliarize myself with the continuity of your writing. I sincerely like it that you take the time to write a REAL story; not just an erotic one but, a genuine tale that mixes life with eroticism. It is also my intention to tell you that the comparison of listening and reading are quite different but I enjoy both and eagerly await the printed submission of Chapter 2. Thank you for the experience of 'both' written & audio presentations!
Anonymousover 13 years agoWow this overshadows anything I have heard here before. A new standard has been set.
Tibxoover 13 years agoA great tale in its own right but to turn it into an audio.
Pure genius.
Anonymousover 13 years agoWow, I never expected part two to be out so soon! Thank you so much to all involved for all the hard work. It really is so well done
Anonymousover 13 years agoUnreal...exciting and what sensuous voices..captured the mood magnificently!
Anonymousover 13 years agoWow Raven you did it again A tale of Forbidden love Parts 1 and 2 were MIND BLOWING! I cant wait to hear the other parts of this story you captured the true essance of the whole story and I wait with baited breath for more as always your biggest Fan :) Aaron
Lelouchover 13 years agoThis is far and away the best piece I've come across on Literotica! The buildup and the gentle but building passion is terrific. I very much look forward to the realization of the conclusion of this story! The narration coupled with the music during the climactic scenes is mind-blowing; and though Raven's sensuous voice is intoxicating, I hope we will hear a bit more of David's vocalizations as well as he consummates his love of his mother!
Anonymousover 13 years agoWOW, it's like i'm watching a movie... it's really good... the sound, the voices of the actors etc. are flawless... the story is really hot... hope tp hear the next part soon and thank you...
chris0077over 13 years agodesperately waiting for the next part..... when should we expect it ?????
Anonymousover 13 years agoWaiting impatiently...Excellent stuff!
Anonymousabout 13 years agothis is really very good... can't wait for part 3.... where is it?
DuggerPlusabout 13 years agoWow. I heard this story a little while ago and all through the winter holiday season up through Valentine's Day and now to the approaching spring, I have hungered for the fourth part. The vision you created, the time warp of lust and wanting between mother and son are intoxicating. I can only hope to write as well. Yet I would be remiss if I didn't mention the voice that captured my heart. Raven, it was your performance that brought these characters and their desire like Cupid's Arrow into my soul. I shall follow what you do on Lit and other places. As for you mejau71, please stop reading this and return to your characters and give them that suitably hot ending only you can pen. I, for one, will be waiting on pins and needles. Thank you again for a wonderful ride.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI heard the first one and it was very good and if this any indication of what to expect them I know I will love it , because tonight I'm going to listen to the third part of the story Thank you very much for making the story interesting and sexy.
MommyLovesCocksover 2 years agoOmg this only gets better. You have a wonderful voice and you paint such a lovely scene.
kparc1212over 1 year agoFor anyone who has never experienced the pure joy and ecstasy of anallingus (sp) your description is spot on! It is the most sensual, intense, satisfying sexual act one can perform or have reformed on them. The sounds you make during your descriptions are spot on! THANK YOU for being back those lovely memories.
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