All Comments on 'Young Crossdress, Meets His Daddy'

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PepperpuppyPepperpuppyover 13 years ago
Young?????

Obviously so young you haven't started school.

Your spelling put me completely off the story and I didn't even bother to finish it. Use a spell checker in future!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow...

You really need to work on your writing skills. The grammatical errors are just overwhelming your story. It is a good story, it is just that you are hitting us with an error every other sentence.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
spelling was... ?

This story needs to be re-written! Too many spelling mistakes also forced me to discontinue reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Man, this was hot!

Sure got turned on. Dream of dressing for a much older man. Please continue. Just ignore the spelling fanatics.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
wow

omg,, this is so erotic,, I wish I was you,,,

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