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SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 13 years ago
You have a wonderful way with poetic metaphors and similes...

I love the title - damsel in this dress - the pun there - and the phrasing - distressed black butterflies, twenty degrees shy of uncertainty, pious bliss - beautifully phrased. Lovely. Sweet O.

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoover 13 years ago
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got me to look too. I like this.

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