All Comments on 'A Tantric Weekend in Autumn'

The first stanza (breath/depths, then chakras/mantras) seemed to establish a rhyme-form like Dante's Divine Comedy, and I was immediately giddy. No such form developed, however. :(

It is a wonderful piece, and an improvement on a similar one recently (right?), but I can't help but wonder if terza rima might add something remarkable.

Thanks for sharing it.