All Comments on 'She called him Luke'

i think this might be one of my favourites of yours! so visual, so stark ... that line 'Dawn's hard bright line' is a kicker, and the piece's darkness is given a little tenderising with your final line. well done, this was so worth reading, i'm glad i got to :rose:

but beautifully sketched in the minimum words. Ty

I'm gonna tweet this beauty. My jaw dropped at the words. Just wonderful Annie.