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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
TEASE!

Ugh! I love this story! But your chapters are too short! It's driving me crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But please keep it coming FAST!!

VisualPervVisualPervover 10 years ago
Good job!

Good job cleaning up most (if not all) the silly little errors that plagued your earlier chapters.

So far I like this light, sweet little story.

SouthernGirl30SouthernGirl30almost 10 years ago

Good story, but the grammatical errors drive me nuts.

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