All Comments on 'The Witch Who Sucked Me'

great story and i hope you win

Great story good humor

I liked the word and name play you had going. I even caught a line in there that reminded me of "Wicked." Perhaps not intentional, but, I found myself singing "Defying Gravity" *grins*

Glenda is just how I'd picture a true Wicked witch to be. Her lines and the mocking of John were humorous. Poor Suzy!

It's a hot one, alright, and creepy, too! Good luck in the contest, seth!

seth. good luck in the contest, muh-man. :)

I love the part at the end where John is just lost in thought.. Just got laid, his date was eaten.. and to boot he is going to be a daddy! Loved it.. easy read! i could invision the stoy as you laid it out!! Bravo

hey there little boy... i really think you are getting in the right direction - cant compare this to your first masterpieces..;)

really good going!!

why don't you write a sequel to this. I for one would love to see how it go on.

Would VERY much love to see what's next for these two!

This was a great story.. Though it probably could have done without the trolls and the eating of the Susy's body. A sequel would be nice, but with the big-titted witch just wanting to only tit-fuck, suck and deepthroat his cock .. no fucking..

a powerful story

??Who was the motionless man in suzys backyard?? seriously though this was a great story. usually I don't care for erotica horror but this one I have read many times