All Comments on 'Incubus'

Wonderfully creative & erotic. Thank you!

Very nice. Good length for the type of piece it is... Definitely have to be in the right mood for this, though. But very well written.

This is a different portrayal of the incubus than I have seen. The creature is all about her needs and her satiation and not so much about his own. There is a tenderness not usually equated with them. Nice job with the brain anatomy. I enjoyed it!

~Luna

This was very good, I enjoyed reading it and actually felt sad for the Incubus at the end. It's quite different than I expected but in a good way. Keep writing.

I am impressed.

and beautifully written

Impressive! And heartbreaking.