All Comments on 'First Time...Even For Barbara'

Maybe more of a valentine than a halloween story.

A cute little story with the contest theme woven in there. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.

Aside from how the pussy died, this is my life in a nutshell. Talk about my life being an open book...gees!

Fun little premise and it's nice to read a story with so few typos and grammar errors. Good luck in the contest. But ... why'd you have to kill the poor little kitty? Poor Tinkerbell.

another brilliant story love it.. you never fail me with you awesome stories.

can't wait for the next surprise story . im wishing it was tomorrow already.

Thank you to all who have read, voted, and commented on my story.

I had fun writing it.

Sorry about the cat (lol).

Good back story, but the end seemed rushed, unfinished.

That was a good story. It had quite a different storyline as compared to those which I have read till now. But, it was a nice one. Keep it up.

Though I'v not read all the contest stories - not even all of andtheend's - this is the most literary story of the lot. There could have been more explicit at the end, but as a Halloween love story it worked well.