All Comments on 'A 50s Tryst'

nice read, but waaaaaay too many spelling and grammar errors

I didn't have time to spell check.

Any intelligent individual can divine the ability to see past the spelling and grammar errors.

But thank you for saying it was a nice read, to those who commented. I don't intend to correct my mistakes because I simply don't have time. I wrote a much better story involving age play but it was rejected on the grounds that it featured child like characters. :[

Keep on writing please