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by jessicaj6410/11/10

thank you

simply beautiful, every bit as beautiful as Kate herself. Erotic, romantic, sensuous, emotional, glorious and, of course, beautiful. Thank you for brightening this lonely woman's afternoon :)

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by Anonymous10/15/10

Great story

Thank you for writing this story I loved it.

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by elle_954901/23/12

This was sweet

My heart broke for Kate in the beginning, but she got everything she deserved. Steph was an awesome character as well. Great story! ~ L

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by idrublood01/27/12

Really Good

It was different in a really good way. 5 stars in my opinion. Thanks for sharing. Please keep up the good work.

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by wordsmith7406/17/12

the story made feel both good and ashamed.

What a great storyline. How many times have we all judged a book by it's cover? Loved it and the characters. Not sure if the story line lends itself to a second chapter but it would be nice to see how this relationship evolves onto something much more. Hhhhmmmm sex on a sunny Sunday in the garden, sounds like a story in its self.

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by Anonymous06/25/12

Adorable!

Oh I just loved this story. The moment I read that Steph was at her doorstep while she was dealing with the delivery man I was like "Oh god! Oh no!" and doing the cover-up-the-next-paragraph maneuver as I shyly read on. But when I read that she was from Saving Face I knew I would love the story. It was so sweet and fabulous. :]
Excellent usage of irony throughout the piece as well :) I should be honest and tell you that I stayed up reading this and it's now nearly 12:30am and I need to be awake by 4am for work.

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by fingers4607/06/12

Fantastic

Brilliant,moving,emotional,moving,emotional,it was if I was there,full of sympathy for the recluse,doing that at the moment,but a brilliant ending,perhaps I

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by VyresOfTheArt07/20/12

Aww, poor Kate.. I'm glad that she found someone to love her even with her disfigurement. What drives people to mutilate and abuse others?.. >.

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by Anonymous05/21/13

Absolutely Brilliant

A truly captivating story, sensitive, compassionate, generous, lovely. It takes a truly nice person to think like that, Thank You.

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