by MistressRedRum
I love the wolf-man bit.. really creative, easy to read..and above all else fun!!
I think there could be more of a story between these two...a great way for them to meet. Maybe he'll come back for her again.
One of the best 1st person stories I've seen in a while.
Very well written and edited!
At the risk of sounding like one of these self-righteous priggs, I'm going to say, wrong category. It was a first rate, non-human, story, just wasn't horror. There was no gotcha, no fear; except for a momentary concern for her own safety as she walked by herself, on the most dangerous night of the year. The reader should feel like he's hanging on the edge of a cliff, does the reader get pulled back to safety, or does he get shoved off, along with the victim? But it was a first rate story!
I liked this story a lot! I love the way you write. I would definitely read more about the wolf man!
As always, I am a great fan of your writing. I'm going to have to look more of yours up now though.