All Comments on 'Life as an Adult Day 01'

by Zenkci

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Very good. I do hope there is more because this was very well written story.

Great comment from the other anonymous.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Looking forward

Please keep going. I am loving this story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Editor

Please get an editor. Your story is great, but there are some terrible mistakes made. For example, "your awake" should be "you're awake," and "sound queues" should be "sound cues."

Good storyline, just seek an editor.

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