All Comments on 'Best So Far'

brilliant story so very hot and horny.

reading this was lkie seeing you being take deep and hard.

bring you to one very hard cumming flollowed by a hugh load of thick cum pumping deep inside you cum filled pussy gush out as his cock go's soft and slip out followed by abusting dam of both his anf your cum

When has cuckolding your husband ever been erotic? Except for the very few sad people who stay married but fuck around. I don't see the logic here.

I loved it. More to cum I hope.

Just dump her and run for the hills

What is with the recent flood of wimp lit on literotica?

Real men don't want to see their wives fucked buy other men, they want to do it themselves. The pleasure us in the taking not watching passively.

And how is it that even the most randomly picked guy is huge and an expert in the sack?

Really lame. How about a story were the wife isn't shared, the wimp husband isn't a wimp, and rye other guy gets shore down by a woman who actually loves and respects her guy?

I think the reason is that too Manu of the authors here need therapy or are man hating dykes. Really, have folks really given thought to the implications of what they write as sexy?

Not sure who is worst, you or your gay hubbie, yuck.

Dear Helen, I am sorry you have been subjected to the sort of stuff people write when you do a loving wives story. It is a terrific story and you deserve better feedback than this rubbish.

I write under the name Wonderful, love loving wives stories as a writer and reader. As a writer, I have had to endure a lot of rubbish, but there you go. Occasionally you get good feedback. I thought you deserved some too, for a great little read.

Well writen and edited.

The story moves smoothly and quickly to the erotic sex scenes.

A very well presented story.

Fucking in the rain would be a super turn on, and having the two most important things in a man's life, Fucking and Fishing combined into one story is a real chore to accomplish, and the author has done it.

Thanks

by an english sick woman no less. Why must you humiliate your spouse writer? Oh because you luv im eh.<P>

No consequence - no reality - just a fetish of saught self disrespect.

Everyone can elect their own kicks it sexual choice. I don't have to stand in line and neither do any of you. If you don't like it, stay out of the line.