All Comments on 'The Apprentice Ch. 01'

by srlmort

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Marbles29Marbles29over 13 years ago
Great

I cant wait to see how this turns out..hope the Next chappie is soon

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 13 years ago
More!

Lol tried to click onto the next page (*grin* because I NEEDED there to be another page), and there was no next page...arrgh! Really good story, and can not wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well Done

This looks like the beginning of a good story. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.

avidreader_01avidreader_01over 13 years ago
nice

great start, im looking forward to reading other chapters...write faster

poisonedLustpoisonedLustover 13 years ago
:)

It was nice...It made me smile..I like it so far..keep going,plz!!lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
"Straddling it is no fun"

All I could think was nk (while envisioning a picket fence)

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