All Comments on 'Whip It Out'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good story

i really enjoyed reading it!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great read

Hope to read more from you!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Pretty good story

Started realistic as many mothers would help son's out in right circumstances. Don't get too carried away. You have good potential, keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

Took a real creepy turn at the end.

kathy2b46kathy2b46over 13 years ago
oh my

so wonderful, do u not think grandma meant she was proud

and not a slut maybe she had done the same

such a great story andi am assuming it is true

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good job!

Enjoyed this story. Great erotic appeal. Kept me interested. Good twist at the end..

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
the ending was sad

I was hoping for him to get to fuck his mother and have a long lasting sexual relationship with her.

Maybe the author could write about what could have happened if he didn't leave the note for his grandma to find.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Amazingly Graceful

Excellent writing! If the story was fiction, it sure as hell could have fooled me. I'm looking forward to some more "true" stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

really good story but could have had a better ending

Roge472xalRoge472xalover 13 years ago
Why not?

I think that Kathy is right, and that Grandma knew more about life. Keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

In the end you made us feel the pain as you felt. Excellent narration.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
wow

I fell in love with your story. Iv neve read a more moving peace..thank you for gracing us with this wonder.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
great story, and...

I love the title. That's what plenty of boys'd love to do in front of their mother--just whip it out--their fat young prick, that is--for mom to see and admire. And then the fun starts.

BetterEndingBetterEndingover 10 years ago
Grandma Was Not Proud

Some wonder if Grandma was proud but I don't think that was the case. She had obviously been crying. She would not have been crying if she was OK with what she saw. I think when she said the mother looked good at it she meant that it was obvious the mother was used to doing it and therefore thought she was a slut.

The story is good and I hope it continues. However, I hope that neither the Mother or the Father is disrespected. Keep it between the mother and son with no impact to the father please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent

Thank You

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Felt truly homespun

I remember that era fondly. You personalize it, the height of a writer's capacity. This is the first thing I've read by you, I hope you've grown. Confusing you're and you're seems to be common these days, but still detracts. Nothing quite detracted like confusing since for sense, though. Something you may want to improve.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
my cool mom

in a much simpler time, sex was thrilling. Today it is a yawn. Times have changed, I feel sorry for the youth,

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 3 years ago
Tender.

Such a beautiful sensual in-depth memory. Frim the innocent start to the sad ending filled with a love only a mother and son can share.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very good story, except for the ending.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aabout 1 month ago

Whether this story is fiction or real, the important thing is that the mother and son accepted each other a sexual beings. The mother taught her son important leasons about pleasing a woman. As for the mother-in-law, I am sorry that the daughter-in-law thought so must of her opinion. The daughter-in-law/mother should have had more solid opinion of herself, her self-worth, her sense of self, and solid id. It is a shame that mother and son became self-estranged for so long. Those were two years they will never get back. This story deserves the 5 star rating I gave it.

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