All Comments on 'A Vampire in the Mirror'

by kuellar

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PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 13 years ago
Very interesting idea...

....thank-you for writing.

mBrowmBrowover 13 years ago
Fine story

The story is well done, both technically and in story-line. I like more eroticism than offered here, but this entry was fun, too. Thanks!

LunaEroticaMysticaLunaEroticaMysticaover 13 years ago
Different...

Oh this was different and the revenge was sweeet! This is the second story I've read tonight in this contest that addresses the comeuppance of bullies and users and abusers. Woohoo! The sexual undertones worked nicely, although an after-the-bite-into-the-mirror sequel would be appreciated :) Goodluck!

~Luna

kuellarkuellarover 13 years agoAuthor
Thank you all...

...for the comments! Much appreciated.

OccamspiledriverOccamspiledriverover 13 years ago
Very Good

Different and well written. Hope to see more

canndcanndover 13 years ago

I liked it....but I'd like to see more. Why was the mirror cold? Anyhow, I'd like more of their story. Where are they and what kind of life can they have on the other side of the mirror?

PennLadyPennLadyover 13 years ago
Interesting

Nice story -- I think this shows potential for both the story and you as the writer. I like the vampire in the mirror, nice twist on the no reflection myth.

KitschshamanKitschshamanalmost 12 years ago
oh my ...

I'm not usually one for vampire stories, but this was wonderful. thanks

AdonisXxXAdonisXxXalmost 9 years ago
wow

well constructed kuellar!!!!

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