All Comments on 'A Graduation Present Ch. 03'

by KayOwen

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Firmhands5Firmhands5over 13 years ago
Well, hopefully soon - lol - great story

Please continue - an have some twists so it won't be predictable!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Yo! You have to continue!

How can you leave this cliff hanger? Your chapters are too short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Sweet serenity

A fresh look at the different sides of new relationships. I like how you've brought out the insecurities that are so raw and nerve wracking at the beginning of a relationship. It would have been great to read Jackson's take for the first 3 weeks but still it's a great build up for what's to come.

Thanks!

KayOwenKayOwenover 13 years agoAuthor
Chapter 3.5

Chapter 3.5 with Jackson's experience will be posted shortly. And much more to come!

xo - ko

ILmonamourILmonamourover 13 years ago
Cute

I like where this is going, your style makes it easy to imagine and anticipate what could happen. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
ahhhhhh continue soon dont just leave us hanging!

yep my title pretty much says it all

devilishdaisy86devilishdaisy86about 13 years ago
Please continue!

Please finish this story! I'm addicted and I want to know what happens!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
noo!!!!!

you need to finish this story!! i love it so much, you cant just leave us hanging. please finish it soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please finish!!!!

Would love to see more of these characters...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great unfinished work!

Please KayOwen, may we have some more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

More??! Please ?!?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

More please!!

GeodraculaGeodraculaover 10 years ago
I definitely want to read more!

This is a great story so far, everyone can relate to it one way or another! Please give us more?

VanillaJade09VanillaJade09about 10 years ago
Amazing!

Thank you so much for writing this series. You are an amazing writer! The characters are beautifully developed, the plot is compelling, and the writing style is sensitive enough to evoke strong feeling but never crosses into sappy. You are very talented and I hope that someday you will have time to finish this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Most perfect story

This story is gorgeous and filled with a sexual class that most stories don't have. It's very detailed and so elegantly charming. I simply adore it, please please finish soon. It really is perfect and I'd love to hear how Andie charms Jackson into sex for the first time!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wonderful

more please!

Hayla86Hayla86over 9 years ago

so.....where is the rest?! I was actually looking forward for them to 'ya know'...lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story so far

Where is the rest of it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Chapter 4??? 5???

more please!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
It isn't coming...............

Folks those stories were written in 2010......I don't know what happen to the author, but I do not think you are going to get any more.....hey I enjoyed the read too, but not going to happen!!!

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