All Comments on 'Crossing the Line'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Those things in your computer desk where you place items such as pens, pencils, etc - they are called drawers. Not draws. Draws are what is referred to when selecting sides or setting up a sporting contest.

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Has Potential

Off to a good start. Would like to read more. You stopped at a very interesting point, what will the mom do? You certainly have many options at your disposal.

RHinSCRHinSCover 13 years ago
Damn

One twenty five a quarter?????? You are getting fucked! It is that much for an ounce where I live.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
RE: Anon

The guy doesnt know any better because he is too busy smoking dope.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 13 years ago
All I can say is more please.

And maybe mum can join in too.

Just a suggestion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Not bad but....

"I feel her squeeze her uterus around my cock,"

Really?

klaxxklaxxover 13 years ago
Y'all.

What's with the mom's "y'all" talk? Really farked the rythm, that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Its a story you morons.

sabra16023sabra16023about 13 years ago
Good story

Keep it cumming. More chapters.Thanks

oldwayneoldwayneabout 13 years ago
Uhm...let's see?

I just might be worth the 5 Stars if you ever finish it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Continue this story

I love this story. Please keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Weed?

I hate weed!

fire37fire37over 1 year ago

Good start. Is it going to get finished?

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