All Comments on 'Revenge thru Hypnosis'

You can write you just had a goofy story line. "Good Luck and Thank You"

wow! you wrote an great story! and in no way was it the usuall revenge for rape storylines i've read before. refreshing it was. keep up the great work julybear 7!! hope to read another chapter or chapters even of these people. again great story you wrote.

Having experienced hypnosis (and, I think, sex while under), I can say that your portrayal of hypnosis rings true. Like your characters, I don't know what I do while under, but I always come out feeling very good. I always look forward to being put under again.

I would like to have seen MORE revenge, LOL.

It was a good story. I guess the whole point was to not leave any real evidence behind - his wife and daughter will claim it was all consensual. Meanwhile, Daddy is going to need a LOT of therapy...and a good divorce attorney!

This was a great story and i would love to see a part 2 mother and daughter getting to know the gregory's

I would have liked some revenge that would have cost the prick some money and his wife and daughter cast him out, the sorry rape artist.

to use her to punish her scumbag father. Makes Sam as bad as Harry to deflower Patti that way.

Sam should have taken Harry's anal virginity, now THAT would have been appropriate!

Far as i can tell ol Harry was justly punished

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I would not have gone quite as far as he did to get even (or ahead of) Harry but it made a good story. Thank you for writing.

The only thing I would have done different would have the father bust the daughters cerry and while he was balls deep in her ass, I would have woken her she would have taken care of the rest

Would take a little time, but would ensure Sam ended up with two smashed knees and spent the rest of his life in a wheelchair.

Wonderful Sam was actually just as big a twat as Harry.

Sam was wrong how he exacted revenge on Harry as he was no better than Harry if what he did. He should have called the cops when he discovered that Harry had raped his wife as there was DNA evidence that could have been used to prosecute Harry. Harry should have been arrested rather than Sam doing what he did to Harry's wife and virgin daughter.

Love the story, I like it a lot. AAAAAA++++++

Would love to see a part 2 to this story.

Great story. Loved it. Maybe the mother and daughter get together with Sam and Barb Gregory without their father and become a new chapter since their kids will be Sam's.

Part 2 now please