Lots of imagination. Not just yours, but the trust you put in the listener to use their own. Very good.
I dug it. I liked the voice manipulation that you used, as well as the time gaps. Great listening, especially for the ending.
Ravenfox you are a VERY creative person. Keep it up. xoxoxoxox
Loved this story. The sound effects and music were awesome! You have a wonderful story voice!
This may be your best entry yet. Very nice effects.
The end really makes it all. This is absolutely fabulous -- Wow! Sound effects, gods, the music was incredible! Perfect choices. This was exquisite.
I'm not really a fan of non-consent, but I love your work. Your moaning and vocal work really sold the non-consent part for me, making it a sexy, steamy delight to hear :)
You keep on raising the stakes, your Audio stories are becoming more complex, more creative, more fun. This one was really a new level. I imagine it took quite an effort and thank you for it. Very enjoyable. Good luck in the contest!
Another master lesson in erotica... Do will really have to wait until January for another installment?
i've always loved ur voice & stories.. but i guess this time u have gone a bit far on the effects
Another hit. I am a fan of Non-consent. Your voice and intonation is great, exquisite and delicious. The added editing and music sound very professional. More MORE M O R E ! ! !
ravenfox - i love your submissions but this one just did not work for me. Looking forward to your next one
Thank you all for your feedback! I hope that the story intrigues you enough that you're intested in the entire series, which I'm beginning work on now. I think it's going to be really hot AND unique. Thank you for your votes, comments and feedback messages.
@Anons who said too many effects and too much echo. I am experimenting and hope to get things just right. I'm sorry that you didn't enjoy this submission. I will gladly listen to any helpful suggestions you may have. Thank you for your feedback.
Five stars is truly worthy of the excellent presentation! You guys did a great job with both the story and special effects! It helped me through a lonely night while the wife is away! ;) I am looking for more in the future!
Holy crap! That was one of the best stories I ever heard!
I've read/heard a lot of stories on here, but I HAD to give my adulation for this one. We need more fully fleshed-out productions like this. I'm still recovering from the utter stupid that is Twilight, and listening to a story like this that actually has some HORROR aspects to it is really helping. Thank you, and I can't wait to hear more. ;)
Love your stories. Very real I'm almost there.
how about a cougar seducing her sons friend.
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