by tone12of12
i liked it , although hard to believe one can change so quick from male to submit as a bitch need some transition time james_38671@yahoo.com
A fair criticism. Unfortunately, I tend to write out stories like these in one go, otherwise I lose momentum, so the quick conversion was necessary due to my lack of ability. Oh well.... Glad you liked it.
Some very Ginsberg-esqe phrasings. There's a couple of lines that are embarassingly good.
I so wanted to look for a dominant shemale to experience this myself. This brought out desires and lust that I never knew that I had. To completely let go and let oneself be driven by naked unchained lust is something I've never experienced. This is a wonderful powerful story.
I love when a man tells me suck it bitch, then I can't suck it fast enough to please him. Have even sucked his buddies to make him happy. I have been beaten when found I was a crossdresser but loved being their bitch.