All Comments on 'Becoming a Bitch'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
good one

i liked it , although hard to believe one can change so quick from male to submit as a bitch need some transition time james_38671@yahoo.com

tone12of12tone12of12over 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks

A fair criticism. Unfortunately, I tend to write out stories like these in one go, otherwise I lose momentum, so the quick conversion was necessary due to my lack of ability. Oh well.... Glad you liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Lots of potential

Some very Ginsberg-esqe phrasings. There's a couple of lines that are embarassingly good.

BimboBambiBimboBambiover 12 years ago
desire

I so wanted to look for a dominant shemale to experience this myself. This brought out desires and lust that I never knew that I had. To completely let go and let oneself be driven by naked unchained lust is something I've never experienced. This is a wonderful powerful story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
sissy bitch

reading this got be so hard, ive wated to be controled by her

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love told

I love when a man tells me suck it bitch, then I can't suck it fast enough to please him. Have even sucked his buddies to make him happy. I have been beaten when found I was a crossdresser but loved being their bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
bitch

I love to be some one bitch

and I am only 18 yrs old

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Awesome

Loved it,hope you write a second part.

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