All Comments on 'Dark Angel: Heat Wave'
by inyotefi
- 6 Comments
Anonymousover 13 years agoinyotef returns! i hope you can return to lara's adventures next :) great story.
Anonymousover 13 years agoWhy do you break this up into such small pieces. Is that just to make it look like you are posting new stories?
It's not even a chapter.
Goodness, imagine if a real book was written like this.
Why not get it down to just each sentence.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI mean it, between you and Supman I don't know who does this better, at least you're still writting. I read your chyoo stuff too; outstanding. Oh and adding the Eyes Only hack, dude you rock!
Anonymousover 11 years agoWho the fuck the anonymous on 12/07/10 thinks he is.. geez.
I didn't read it yet but I'll do it soon.
Anonymousover 11 years agoa little short but from your storylist it seems to be a nice little intro into a much larger Dark Angel series. You have Max's character down pretty well, and introduced her heat in good way. second sex scene was hot.
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