All Comments on 'Let's Begin'

WHAT?! That's it?! That can't be it. You go into painfully delicious detail about foreplay and then leave your reader hanging.

Thank you for your comment and I can appreciate your desire of wanting more. A few of my stories do lead to the literal and figurative climax but I have more fun in exploring other expectations that people have in reading erotica. The focus in this case was indeed the foreplay. A lot of times I'll see the generic plot and development of perhaps a minimal amount of romance with obligatory description of body parts with occasional graphic descriptions of a cum shot. My pieces are not to be confused with Penthouse Letters material. I'll be releasing more material over time and hope you enjoy them a bit more. Actually if you don't let me know because I'm not averse to feedback. Plus it's nice to know that people are reading my material!

-Jim

I love the style in which you wrote this.