by Donkeepuncher
Of course it's too far-fetched for nonfiction; nonfiction is real. Get it together. I thought it was amazing. Well written and creative. I'm sure people with an imagination will be able to comprehend this concept.
this could get even better if you continue onto the wedding and have the brides mother , sisters and everyone else corrupted , behaving , blasphemously in the church , please
Wonderful story....so hot. Write some more of this type and post it. You can add the use of bible and crucifix too....that would be more interesting. ...