by kitten2010
CANT WAIT FOR CH 2!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW, YOUR WRITING IS...WOW!!!!!!!
I'm so happy you've started the new series, I love love love Brady and Ezra, you have to keep them together, don't let that Brian guy get on the way please
Oh I was so very excited for this chapter and it definatly didnt disapoint. I was a little sad/excited because I was expecting more Heaven and Hell before you got me hooked on another one of your amazing stories! But I am now officially hooked and cant wait for more. I kind of wanna see brady punch brian in the face if he tries to make a move on Ezra :D
wow, i can see the potential drama there...brady is so lost as to what he wants to do, i hope he doesnt start resenting Ezra for his missed opportunity in the military...brian is definitely going to be a problem in the future i bet,...i cant wait to find out, pls write faster
Great start to the sequel...not that I would have expected to find anything less from one great author! Way2go kitten! :)
i knew that the sequel would be just as good as the first and this was a great start! i'm so glad you didnt just finish the story at the end of "high school romance" Love it and i can tell already that im going to love the rest! :D
more more more! :) this is getting good. Poor brady! You just know he needs Ezra every bit as much as Ezra needs him. I don't want Brian to get in the way but it *would* make a better story.
Ooo hurry up pls!
i love this couple but i dont know if i can read anymore. i really really hope theres no more raping or any cheating its heartbreaking.
please write more but please dont write about cheating plz i will break my heart but then u did say their is a happy ending
I really appreciate how you've shown the growth in their relationship - from Ezra being nearly catatonic to being able to demand what he wants from Brady physically. Really powerful. And showing Brady's insecurity also allows us to remember that no matter how intense the love, we all have moments where we fear things irrationally.
Ohhhhh, Brady's jealousssss. I love it they're relationship has grown so much.
i like how you have laid this out. the tension is building!