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Literotica Ch. 01

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by Pepperpuppy11/08/10

You lucky mongrel

Thats how to write a pretend mother raped by son story. Non violent, no vicousness, just an out and out quick fuck which leaves the mother wet and sticky and dribbling cum out of her. - well done.

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by digdaddyrich11/08/10

It's a fucking shame

He didn't have enough respect for her to kiss her after he fucked her.

It may have been rape at the start, but she relented and allowed herself to enjoy the good fucking she was getting, so at least he could have made feel loved, even if all he was doing was using her.

I hope in the next chapter that he shows his mother that he loves her, and she is more than just a wet hole to shoot his cum.

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by Eric_Shift11/09/10

Too quick

Just a little more time and more meat to the story and it would be far more enjoyable

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by hornacek11/11/10

started out good

You could have done so much with him teasing and seducing her but you went straight for the forced sex which just killed the mood. I won't encourage you to continue this story since the damage is done, but you started good so I encourage you to write another story, hopefully you won't make the same mistakes again.

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