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Literotica Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Eric_Shift11/09/10

Again too quick

Would have been better to have combined both these chapters together for chapter one.
Great potential though.
Keep it up.

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by digdaddyrich11/09/10

It's a good storyline but the chapters are way too short

This chapter was under 800 words, that's just too short for anyone to really know what the story is going to become, and what it will eventually be when it's completed.

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by JOHNRALPH06/04/12

sweet

nice and short fuck story keep it going thanks

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