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Zane Ch. 03

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by hisangelbeauty11/11/10

Nice

I love this story, this chapter was way too short but still very good

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by TheIncognito11/11/10

Thanks!

more is coming, don't worry! ;) Chapter 4 is even shorter, but steamier. but some chapters will be short sometimes. Chap. 4 is still being approved so it should be up tonight or tomorrow hopefully. Thanks for reading guys!

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by mariasmd11/12/10

what..

come on, this was great, but way too short!!! who is zane? really?

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by TheIncognito11/12/10

And I just recently got internet back onto my computer. And I got a new laptop since the previous one was hacked and all info was lost essentially. What was days worth of Zane writings, I could only salvage a little more than 2 pages worth on here. Hence, chap. 4 was supposed to be a part of chap 3 and more, but Literotica failed to upload it correctly, so I had to make a very very short chap. 4. But I'm working my way back up to speed. Anyways, I want some feedback on what you guys think will happen. Do you think Zane is as innocent as he says? Is Blair holding any secrets? I like to make you guys waiting for more. ;) And if there are any requests for a certain type of story, send me a message!

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by THELOVELY1GLO12/19/11

Good

that she has found love, but never knowing nor receiving it she ran from it. Good to see that she has Zane's back after all...GO get your man Blair!!!

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