All Comments on 'Logan and Lauren'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More plz :D

Absolutely great story, can't wait for the rest!!

honeybreehoneybreeover 13 years ago
Great start so far!

Can't wait to read the next installment of these two, you have me interested for more!

HausofgausHausofgausover 13 years ago

So far so good, can't wait for the next update!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
mia

nice start i think it will be a great story keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Do more

Great start.

IrishWelshWenchIrishWelshWenchalmost 13 years ago

Great start...I hope you decide to add some more on these two....

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

Please continue this story

got2luvmelgot2luvmelover 12 years ago
Love your stories

this one is no exception. I can't wait to find out if Logan thinks Lauren is just as hot as she thinks he is. I love how she is so mean to him, unlike the rest of the school. Was literally ROTBed laughing at him calling her out in the parking lot and speeding off. I would've been mad too, this mofo got people under the impression that I'd accept a date with his conceited ass. HA

LadyJuicyGaloreLadyJuicyGaloreover 12 years ago

Lol! I love the "it was all a dream" twist. I can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
awsome

Great story and great state to

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
uhoh

i was thinking this had to be a dream...its too early for that stuff right? lol

emj417emj417about 12 years ago

thank goodness it was a dream. i actually thought he was raping her.

fluerfluerover 11 years ago

I just discover this story and I can't wait to read more.

NeverEndMeNeverEndMeover 11 years ago
xD nice!

It was a dream. That took me by so much of a surprise xD Seriously, you had me on that one. Good job.

ScorpMoonScorpMoonover 11 years ago
off to a fast start so far

Very hot and descriptive!! Glad it was a dream.

quietman200quietman200over 10 years ago
What a relief!

I was reading woith disgust and disdain for this asshole, and then Lauren woke up. Nice job. I doubt anyone saw that coming. The way you had already portrayed him as being so smug and conceited made it believable. I'm glad it was just a dream. I hope there's more to come. There's a great opportunity here for a touching love story.

ladiebrowneyezladiebrowneyezalmost 9 years ago
ok no

this easy loose pussy bitch ruined the story for me, i thought she was day dreaming, yep i'm stopping here, picking up my books and exiting this library.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow

It was a daydream, you jackasses.

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