by Samuelx
Look you either need to write a bio on the area, and leave time for background story or leave it out compleatly because it just distracts from the sex. If you want to be a serious writer you have to accept that formulas exist for a reason. You give us a bio before the emotional/sexual stuff happens so we get the characters... not so much durring though there is room for a little revelation. This way we are involved when things get serious, but arnt distracted... I really didnt need to know that he was from canada while he was balls deep in that beautiful black man.
I too am crazy about white studs. I need more stories like this! Great read!