I make a formal request to have more stories of this family presented for our enjoyment and hopefully yours. What a twisted little tale of family fun. Thanks
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Anonymous11/11/10
IUD
LMAO IUD instead of IED. I love it. With a family like that it may just have been an IUD that killed him. LOL. Not a bad story over all, just hard to get over the IUD thing.
I am so sorry, I can't believe I missed this, as funny as it sounds it was just an oversite, and me with a military background. It was suppose to be IED, Duh. The one that blows up. Ok have your laughs, it is a very funny concept, I know the lack of the pill has killed a few men, lol, but this is a first. I will be the first to also point out that it should have been lessened and not lessoned. Thanks for taking the time to read me.
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Anonymous12/04/10
very good
You have done a great job on this one and the pun was great IUD (lol). I hope that you will make is into a series that all can enjoy I believe this family could have a lot to tell just waiting to be release from your mind.
Again great work
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Anonymous12/13/10
I came back to read this again
I loved this story. It's the first one that I have read that I actually came back specifically to read again. I agree with the reviewer that said you could keep this family going. I think it is Hot and could get even Hotter with future stories. Keep up the great writing.
An IUD, Intrauterine device is an implanted contraceptive. Though I must admit the image of an IUD killing a man is pretty hilarious.
Oh so nasty and fun
I make a formal request to have more stories of this family presented for our enjoyment and hopefully yours. What a twisted little tale of family fun. Thanks
IUD
LMAO IUD instead of IED. I love it. With a family like that it may just have been an IUD that killed him. LOL. Not a bad story over all, just hard to get over the IUD thing.
Oh My God
I am so sorry, I can't believe I missed this, as funny as it sounds it was just an oversite, and me with a military background. It was suppose to be IED, Duh. The one that blows up. Ok have your laughs, it is a very funny concept, I know the lack of the pill has killed a few men, lol, but this is a first. I will be the first to also point out that it should have been lessened and not lessoned. Thanks for taking the time to read me.
very good
You have done a great job on this one and the pun was great IUD (lol). I hope that you will make is into a series that all can enjoy I believe this family could have a lot to tell just waiting to be release from your mind.
Again great work
I came back to read this again
I loved this story. It's the first one that I have read that I actually came back specifically to read again. I agree with the reviewer that said you could keep this family going. I think it is Hot and could get even Hotter with future stories. Keep up the great writing.
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