All Comments on 'Office Escapades Ch. 01'

by AriesAscendant

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice first try rookie!

Liked your story but want a bit more detail about the characters bodies. Like how big are her areolas? Colour? Size and shape of nipples, etc.

Not specific examples just throwing it out there.

Anyway, loved your characters and the story. Keep it cumming!

XodanXodanover 9 years ago
It's been a while

Realy liked your story, characters and build up...

Too bad you stopped !

Please keep it up !

Anyway thanks for your work

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