All Comments on 'Punishment'

by Julie20

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
I like the thought that she would become a high class hooker

She could be pimped out to wealthy men and have her perform as a school girl for them and then fuck them until they are weak in the knees.

Hot and erotic. Reading about a whore being trained and humiliated is a turn on. What is so good is that she enjoys the treatment and the humiliation.

The more you whip her ass and treat her badly the more she loves it. Thanks for the good read.

BarbaraBarbaraover 13 years ago
Pain/pleasure or forced sex quite droll, without descriptive 'victim' emotions included!

Humiliating for authors, without experience in actual 'naked' submissions! Advise inflicting medium pain 'stark naked' before forcible anal entry, to improve future verbal ramblings from readers'perspective? Julie shouldn't be visibly marked until she refuses to exhibit 'masturbatory' intimacy! Keep on writing, to achieve authenticity in 'BDSM' type genres, using actual experiences!

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 2 years ago

nearly perfect situation LOL

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