Literotica's numero uno expert on cocksucking! Keep it going girl. You rock!
I can't wait until the next chapter!
The development and description at the beginning are well done, setting up some tension, but not too much, then suddenly we suddenly switch in the coach's mind from Lucia the attractive woman to Lucia the cum-slut and the real story starts.
Lucia, once again, proves how great and sensous a fellatrix she is! I can't wait to read what happens in the ensuing chapters. Keep up the great writing and please don't leave out any juicy details, GML. It's great to see you're back again and writing stories to keep any guy hard! Thanks, RCG
Than having your dick sucked dry by a subserviant little cumslut like Lucia, so the story is a winner!
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