Great understanding of anatomy. It's diffucult for me to draw a person's back. You've done wonderfully here.
I agree with BBW the back is very well done and the arm as well, both very convincing. While she appears to be the subject the intruder could be tweaked some, Fey holds himself very uptight. I don't know if this was intentional but I'd make the stance more relaxed, aggressive even, as a captor in the image he appears nervous and with his guard and up not very 'captorly'.
Yay! You put it up. Looks great! Thanks again, Dixie. :3
You are definitely a "true" artist. One of the few good ones on this site. Keep uploading your art!
this is very well done & you did, in my opinion, a wonderful job of staying with the desriptions given of the charaters!! I love having a visual aid to a wonderful story!
This is absolutely amazing, but I pictured Kirik much bigger.
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