All Comments on 'Email from Cindy's Box #03-01'

by little_asian_cherry

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ARTGARTGover 13 years ago
Well done!

Hi Cindy! Your best yet. Very well developed. And I think I know which library story you're referring to. Naughty girl.

ARTG

little_asian_cherrylittle_asian_cherryover 13 years agoAuthor
Hey there Artg!

I'm glad you enjoyed it... the next part is the most graphic story I've written... I hope it turns out well! I'm doing a final edit now... I should post it in the next few days ^.^

cbexhibcbexhibover 13 years ago
Well done

Hard to put my finger on why I like this one so much. It's got a certain naturalism/realism and sort of sidesteps the usual cliches and expectations, which is refreshing to see against the more predictable and fantastical stuff I see on here (though I like those stories too...)

I'm glad you focused the story on yourself instead of a group. It's definitely easier to follow like this. Very hot!

leverkuhnleverkuhnover 10 years ago
beautiful story

what a lovely tease...thanks.

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