All Comments on 'Tasting the Teacher'

by Kristuffer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice Story

A bit rushed, try expanding things a little and build some sexual excitement...... Name changed from Carla to Clara.

DedeMDedeMover 13 years ago
nice idea!

Nice idea, great start, it did feel a little rushed at the end, but I like where you were trying to go with it...!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Rushed fantasy

A little rushed with some teacher identity problems.

This story seems to be more of a male directed fantasy rather than by a lady with lesbian experience. Very much in the wham bam school of porno writing.

Lexie

gotranegotraneover 10 years ago
Sequel! Sequel!

We've got to have a sequel to this one, it would be a sin, not too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
to fast

Good start but quite unbelievable. It all comes together way to fast. The teacher being a porn actress was to much. I didn't like her or the so called mom. Nice try but no brass ring

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wow

This was really hot

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

There are thousand of names you can give to your characters. Why would you use "Clara" and "Chloe"? The names are way too similar. The stories on this site are for a quick read. Don't make your reader go back up to the start of the story to get straight who is who.

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