All Comments on 'White Silk Gloves'

Nice story. I'm sure this is more common than folks realize. Maybe when you see a woman in silk gloves you should wonder where they've been?

A real erotic story, and not a single mention of any sluts or wimp. See that other authors? You can write good stories for lw with wimps in them!

This story is about a wife letting someone esle do things to her that the husband should be doing. And when the wife gets to the ladies room she expects/hopes it is her dance partner NOT her husband.

The next story will see this couple go further and the husband WILL be a wimp and a cuckold. And the wife WILL be the slut she wants to be. If that is your thing then go ahead have at it. I will leave this writers stories alone.

Last thing we need is another gay as wimp/cuck writer on her putting it in the wrong category .

the thought behind the story was good, but the writing in broken English and poor grammar was very much a turn off. A little polishing of this story could have made it much hotter.

Predictable. Not very erotic or stimulating. But keep trying

Agree with the previous comment about grammar and spelling.

When I read the phrase "all he seen" in the fourth line, I got turned off, and speed-read the rest.

Just what I thought it'd be. :)

Too hard to read for any interest in the point.