All Comments on 'Phantom Touch'

this is a very nice starting point :)

A good start to what can be a great story. What you need is a return visit.

Me like this story - it seems like a fantastic little tease going on, enough to perk our interests and not enough to leave us satisfied. So the big question is... will there be more? You have my curiosity peaked now.

So my friend LC sent this one to me and I have to agree with her I want to know more. You have piqued my interest and even though I know you mentioned that this was a one off I wouldn't mind seeing it go further. Well written.

I surely hope you continue this piece.

... that you can't think of anyplace to go with this story. I just read it and already my mind is churning out ideas, LOL. Is it the ghost of her fiance who died tragicly before they were married, His love so strong that it defies death itself? Or is it an evil entity that promises pleasure only to ultimately bring her terror beyond imagining? There are just so many possibilities for you to let this be it. Please continue.

That was truly delightful. I was wanting one of those phantoms myself to come wake me up in the middle of the night :-)

Great chapter! Well written and interesting too. Off to read the next chapter as you obviously did come up with something after you posted this one :-)

I just got hard when it ended...

Nice start. Can't wait to read the rest