All Comments on 'Pleasure Gardening'

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
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this looks like poetry, smells like poetry, but it also smells like a cliche fest.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 13 years ago
Excellent verse

Though twelve one does have a point with "purple depths" and the final two lines.

To hell with it though - I LIKED it! EX..CEL..LENT!

Smiles

Sweet O.

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