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by vrosej10

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
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"In the moment before

Before the tongue"

interesting

"Wedged against the wall

On the edge of a kiss"

liked the "wedged-edge" play

good ending line

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 13 years ago
Excellent As Ever

I loved the sardonic ending. S.O.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 13 years ago

I liked the poem and loved the last line too.

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