The best stories are the ones that make you want to emulate the characters ....... can't wait for the next time I ride a roller coaster!
More of Lizzie, please.
great story. not a small town girl, but into exhibitionism, i have done the same as lizzy, the only difference is that i wore a very short skirt, instead of shorts. i am impressed with the telling. please continue.
vixen (yes, that is my name)
nudistunite@yahoo.com
English
Enticing
The best stories are the ones that make you want to emulate the characters ....... can't wait for the next time I ride a roller coaster!
More of Lizzie, please.
Well Done
I really enjoyed your work...look forward to reading more
Great start
Really enjoyable story and very well written.
Great story!
Please carry on, cannot waite to read more! :-)
Please continue
More More
Yes please give us more
Excellent
Excellent start to what could be a fantastic series. Very well written. Please continue.
outstanding
so close to home....
A great story! Hard to believe it's your first submission here. Congratulations on a wonderful beginning; now just write a lot more LOL.
Very nice! I've bookmarked you, so I can read more about Young Lizzy!!!
Nicely done!
Enjoyed your story, CMU !!
Hope we hear more ...
More please!
Nice work. I hope you choose to continue the story.
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great story. not a small town girl, but into exhibitionism, i have done the same as lizzy, the only difference is that i wore a very short skirt, instead of shorts. i am impressed with the telling. please continue.
vixen (yes, that is my name)
nudistunite@yahoo.com
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