by MemberX
Yes. Sweet ending for this chapter.
But, there is the sense that the best part of the story is yet to be written.
I hope you will build on this story over a long period of time.
js
I loved the story, and I'm sorry to see it end, but it was a great ending (even though it ended before there was any actual sex)
This story was just the right length, with a satisfying ending.