All Comments on 'Jenna's Story'

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chris_brownchris_brownover 13 years ago
wonderful beginning

i really think this has the potential to be a good multiple chapter series,if you think you're up to the challenge,id suggest you strongly consider writing more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Just for you

I loved it! I am a vampire fan. The only thing I would say is it felt a little rushed. The first sex scene started very well then flew by. I know you have more passion. I would just love to see it.

TawnyPurrrzzTawnyPurrrzzover 13 years ago

Always have been a fan of vampyre lore, and this story captured my interest quickly. I see potential for you to elaborate and build on the story, definitely. Personally, I would love to read more about Logan and Jenna. Their adventures, both sexual and non. :)

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