All Comments on 'Jaylene Models For The First Time'
by photoscribe
- 32 Comments
Anonymousover 13 years agoIs she really modelling for the story ? or you found the picture then type the story ?
Barbaraover 13 years agoPhotoscribe gives many mixed signals to his fans with choice of models.
Suspecting male motives in his work, not critical of the text,his place in literotic history will doubtlessly justify comments made by his fan-base!
x_JohnDoe_xover 13 years agoI have looked at your other stories and in all your stories they have all been gorgeous. Thanks for finding them and for your stories. They are fun, hot and sexy. Please continue posting the stories.
Anonymousover 13 years agoWow, your illustrated stories are great. You certainly have some lovely models. Thanks.
Anonymousover 13 years agoA very beautiful model as well as a good storyline as normal only one small detail was out of place the mentioning of the closer look of the piercing in the photo's there are no piercings just tattoos
photoscribeover 13 years agoAuthoryes there really is a piercing, actually two... small be there none the less and visible in several of the photos as little bars with balls through the nipples.
Anonymousover 13 years agoShe looks just like a girl in my senior physics I teach at the high school... I came in my pants... now, when I see her, I'll being 'seeing' her...\
Thanks.
Jim
Erotonautover 13 years agoNicely handled: the model is very attractive indeed.
Anonymousover 13 years agoI love how you have so many pictures that go with your stories. I can't wait for more!
Anonymousover 13 years agoI can't get past the model to read the story...lol,but it's gotta be good.
BbwCupCakeover 13 years agoVery intersting story, love the piercings, your breasts and nipples are hot!
Anonymousover 13 years agoRated a 5! Best illustated story by far and the model is hot as hell
WSteven1almost 13 years agoRedheaded, freckled, slender, tattooed...she is beautiful...more pix please!?!?
Anonymousover 12 years agoHow have I missed you? I loved the story and you are one sexy gal. Great pics. Please do more. Perhaps a trip to the dermatologist to have 'all' of your skin checked over?
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoLove the reluctance in all of your stories...it's all about the buildup!Keep them coming.
Bob_Aganoushabout 11 years agowell written, and the photos illustrated the story very nicely
spankfunforabout 11 years agoThe writer's story along with the pictures is out standing! Jaylene made my tongue hard and my eyes very happy! I admit I came twice!
zazrix9over 4 years agoredheads AND freckles slay me. She's too beUatifuckle to read the story
thomas_deanalmost 2 years agoThe Muse: she stoops to conquer.
this is a genteel story about a first time model with accompanying photographs. There is much to commend itself about the story, the inexperience of a young adult failing to read the fine print committing herself to much more than she anticipated, a newbie who is gently coaxed into the role she obliged herself to play, and a friendship and working partnership with an admirer.
It's a well done story, highly recommended.
