All Comments on 'Jasmine Unleashed'

Pretty good, but kinda seems like it's missing a paragraph right at the end. Maybe this will be rectified with a part 2? =)

Good job and I agree with the first poster. :)

A wonderful story, beautifully told in great detail.

She knows what she desires and has the courage to get it. I'm glad the clumsy neighbor didn't set her back. Jasmine dosent seem the innocent, I thought. Lucy being included, is she to shy or a girls best friend.Taking possession of James cock, I hope to be around (not on my balcony) and read more.

You have a good mix of soft, sweet, innocent. The the rawness of adult sex.

Thanks, hope to read more. And to find your story on Literotica.

This Rocks. *~*

As I said before your writing is lovely, I wish you would carry on with it and at the very least finish the stories you have started so beautifully. Bob